My Deadly Sin

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By jenblacksheep

Why do you invade my dreams at night?
Tempt me, tease me, like it’s alright
Your mysterious air burns fire within
I know you, my deadly sin


Dragging me in with your deep blue eyes
I see a devil in an angel’s disguise
Toxic words, deceptively sweet
Why is it only in dreams we meet?


You lick your lips and I’m on my knees
Not even your touch can put me at ease
I’m screaming, I want it, a sweet release
I love and I hate, you won’t leave me in peace.


Coming towards me, too good to be true
I know exactly what you will do
Your hand on my neck as you pull me closer
And like every night the dream will be over.

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Tom Cornett Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

This is cool....and hot. thanks! :)

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livewithrichard Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

LIked it, very good poem.

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jenblacksheep Hub Author 2 years ago

Thanx a lot guys!!

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Paper Moon 2 years ago

Dreams can leave one in quite a state. :)

Pachuca213 2 years ago

that is quite a poem! I liked it!~ JJ

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 2 years ago

this is a great poem!

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jenblacksheep Hub Author 2 years ago

Thanx a lot for all your positive comments. It really means a lot to me!!

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AEvans Level 7 Commenter 2 years ago

my, my what a breathtaking poem. You can see it feel it, imagine it. :)

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Neil Sperling Level 5 Commenter 2 years ago

I loved the poem - This line is Great "Not even your touch can put me at ease"

Mmmwwwaaa

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jenblacksheep Hub Author 2 years ago

*blushes* thanx! I love this poem and I'm glad so many others do too.

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epigramman 24 months ago

I am in a dream-like state right now - your writing is something to marvel at and say - "wot the heck was dat?"

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jenblacksheep Hub Author 24 months ago

Wow, thanks a lot. Haven't had any comments on here for a long time, so it's nice to know that people do still read it from time to time. Thanks for the comment :D

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